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1、Michelle Students know the Several approaches to expand the basic sentence patterns Main points Some approaches for expanding basic sentence patterns Difficult points 1. Addition 2. Coordination 3. SubordinationThe artist work pushes our civilization to a higher lever. Artists work upgrades our civi

2、lization.For example, you work in a big company. Suppose you work in a big company.Youll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. youll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. we will get nowhere

3、if we rely on luck.He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. he will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.Their brain is still very young. they are still immature.Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. dissatisfaction impels people for the better.They c

4、annot analyze what is right and what is wrong. they cannot tell right from wrong.It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. it will help children learn to make good use of time.Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. though it is not the best job, he can make ends

5、 meet with it.I left the classroom after the lecture was finished. I left the classroom after I finished the lecture . The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can bring them big money.They like an active li

6、fe but not a peaceful life. They like an active life rather than a peaceful life.Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. Some cigarettes may cost even more.Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new product

7、s.In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. In order to meet the needs of future work, students must grasp some technical skills.It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand

8、.This knowledge will become a part of your body. This knowledge will become part of you.They cannot think clearly. They cannot think straight.Money can improve their living standard. Money can improve their life.Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. Parents

9、always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies l

10、ater. One purpose of education is to learn to learn.Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano classes. Many parents send their children to piano classes.Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. The best part of eati

11、ng out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.Smoking can help you relax your mind. Cigarettes can help you relax.Everyone will have many friends in his life. Everyone has friends in his life.It is children who clear about their interests. It is children who are clear about their own inte

12、rests.I agree the latter idea. I agree with the latter idea.People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. People should learn no matter how old they are. People are never too old to learn.No one knows all the things. No one knows everything. No one is an encyclopedia. I was admitted to a

13、 key university for which few dared to sign up. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to apply. They will learn the bad habits. They will develop the bad habits. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. Lastly, higher education means higher salary.By making friends who ar

14、e different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dreamThere shouldnt exist this kind of words that hi

15、gher education only is available to good students. We shouldnt say that higher education is only available to good students.College is not your lifes only aim.College is not the only aim of your life. Dont let others comment shake your decision. We shouldnt change our mind because of others comments

16、. So the university may be a waste of time for those students. So studying in university will be a waste of time for them. Its helpful for all people to get to higher knowledge level. Its helpful for all people to get more knowledge. They know how to achieve their dreams. They know how to achieve th

17、eir goals/to realize their dreams. 当被问及对现在有关美国总统比尔克林顿的沸沸扬扬的议论有什么看法时，大多数人认为这种暧昧关系纯属私事。但是，还有很多人认为他的行为应当受到谴责。我个人认为总统犯了这些过错，应该被指控。 the ongoing uproar骚动，喧嚣 involving U.S. President Bill Clinton , the affair involves a purely private matter . his actions deplorable可叹的，悲惨的 . the president committed impeach

18、able可控告的，可弹劾的 offences . 2. 涉及北京机动车使用量增加这一问题，有的人认为应该限制使用。另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是，无论车辆多少，必须对废气排放实行控制。 the increasing use of motor vehicles in Beijing , use should be limited . . emission controls must be instituted regardless of the number of vehicles. 3. 目前，针对流动工人的问题展开了普遍的争论。反对流动工人增加的人认为这会导致犯罪率升高

19、，从而危害社会稳定。他们主张应该严格限制进入中国城市的流动工人。但是，另一方面，支持廉价劳动力流入的人主张，为了支持大规模的城市基础设施建设规划，流动人口是必需的。 the problem of itinerant巡回的，流动的 workers . the rising migrant population increasing numbers rising crime rates and harm social stability . migrants entering China s cities . the influx流入 of the cheap labor force , migr

20、ants are needed to support the massive urban infrastructure construction program . 4. 人们普遍认为过度砍伐造成了夏季特大洪水。专家认为中国必须推行大规模的植树造林计划。但我对仅仅植树造林就能解决问题表示怀疑。 extensive deforestation heavy summer flooding . China must introduce a massive afforestation program . afforestation 5. 大多数人认为财富为所有问题提供解决的办法。但是，我认为，尽管财富

21、提供物质上的利益，一个人应该放弃物质至上的追求，而是集中精力追求幸福。 wealth provides solutions to all problems . the material benefits wealth provides , one should abandon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness . 越来越多的人通过互联网进入了“信息时代”。针对这一现象，一些人认为互联网消除了障碍，为人们提供了与世界即时链接的途径。但是，他们有没有意识到迅速发展的信息技术也

22、能导致侵犯隐私？ An increasing number of people are joining the Information Age via the Internet . In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world . But do they raelize that rapidly advancing information technology can also le

23、ad to intrusions of privacy ? 通货膨胀又是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。 Inflation is yet another new and bitter truth we must learn to face . 也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是遍布各级政府的官员腐败。 Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is official corruption , which is pervasive in all levels of government . 许多人谈论的一个

24、最严重的问题集中在缺乏足够的居住空间。 One of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on the lack of adequate housing space . 我们国家（中国）如今面临的紧迫问题之一是克服城乡收入水平之间的差距。One of the pressing problema facing our nation ( China ) today is overcoming disparities in urban and rural income levels . 城区的迅速扩大在很多情况下侵占了宝贵

25、的可耕地，使人们普遍认识到发展不能以牺牲农业为代价。政府更加重视这个问题，越来越多的不必要的工程被终止。 The rapid expansion of urban areas has in many cases encroached on valuable cultivatable land , and led to a general recognition that development must not be carried at the cost of agriculture . The government has attached greater importance to th

26、e problem and an increasing number of redundant projects are being terminated . 世界上越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。 There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection . 近年来，艾滋病蔓延的幅度进一步扩大，一项新的研究预测，到2005年，世界上有超过三千万人将感染这一可怕的疾病。 There has been a dramatic increase in the spr

27、ead of HIV/AIDS in recent years , with a new study projecting that the dreaded disease will affect over 30 million people worldwide by the year 2005 . 与残疾人一起工作使一个人不得不对他们坚持不懈的渴望印象深刻。 Working with the disabled cannot help but leave one impressed with their indefatigable desire . 也许没有问题比安乐死和人工流产更有也许没有问

28、题比安乐死和人工流产更有争议性，它们都涉及结束一个人的生命。争议性，它们都涉及结束一个人的生命。 Perhaps no issues are more controversial than euthanasia and abortion , both of which involve taking the life of a human being . 历史上，人口过剩的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。 Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now . 29. 对人们行为的多年观

29、察使我能够得出这样的结论：平庸和成功的主要区别仅仅在于相关的个人。成功的个人不断寻求进步，而他们比较懒惰的同时代人仅仅满足于现状。 Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between mediocrity and success lies solely with the individual concerned . Successful individuals consistently seek advancement , while their less

30、industrious contemporaries are merely content with the status quo . 31. 近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X%的调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X%的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢？ There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranke

31、d getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness ? 32. 几个月前，我的一个朋友死于一场与酒后驾车有关的悲惨车祸。这件事情一点儿也不罕见，事实上是数以千计的案件的典型，这些案件与在酒精作用下开车的人有关。Some months ago , a friend of mine was killed in a tragic

32、automobile accident involving a drunk driver . The incident was far from rare , and was in fact typical of thousands of cases involving people dricing under the influence of alcohol . 当你想表达越来越多,还只会more and more,当你写想要,还停留在want的水平时，以下的动词表达就派上用场了 1=越来越： be increasingly +adj.，be on the rise，a growing nu

33、mber of 2=充分发挥潜力/能力： develop ones ability / potential to the full，give full play to ones ability 3=引起人们注意： claim call / attract general / public / world-wide attention to sth. 4=适应新的形势/变化： get used (accustomed) to / adapt / adjust / accommodate oneself to new environment/ change 5=接触各种思想/经历： be expo

34、sed to new ideas / experiences / problems 6=接触社会： come into frequent / close contact with the world / society 7=产生影响： have / exertiz:t 运用，发挥 a profound deep / far-reaching influence on life / personality，have a dramatic / undesirable/ unpleasant / negative / passive / harmful / damaging / destructiv

35、e effect on 8=满足要求： meet / satisfy / accommodate the demand of 9=补偿损失： compensate for / make up for the loss / damage 10=对很好的了解： have a better understanding / appreciation 11=培养对的信心： develop / foster ones interest / confidence in 12=经历变化/困难/艰险： undergo / experience great changes / hardships / experi

36、ence 13=表现出自信心等： project ones confidence / feeling / image 14=追求学习/职业： pursue ones academic（理论的）interest / professional career; be in pursuit of 15=学习知识/技术： pursue / acquire knowledge / technology / skill 16=被看作学习的榜样： be held up as a good example; serve as an example 17=交流经验/知识： share / exchange exp

37、erience / ideas / problems / knowledge 18=发挥/起到重要作用： play an（important / active / great / dramatic）role / part 19=确立/追求目标： set / establish / pursue a goal / higher standard 20=到达目标： achieve / accomplish / attain the goal / aim / object 21=克服困难： overcome / defeat obstacles / difficulty 22=面临危险/困难： be

38、 confronted / faced with / in the face of danger / difficulty 23=阻碍了成功： stand in the way of success，be an obstacle/ barrier to success / growth 24=阻碍了发展： harm / do harm to / hamper / impede / stunt the development of 25=求得帮助： seek for / ask for / enlist征募；谋取的赞助或帮助 ones support / help 26=施加压力： impose

39、 / put / exert pressure on 27=提供机会/信息： provide / offer / furnish an opportunity / information for sb. 28=抓住机会： grab / seize / take the opportunity 29=得到机会： enjoy / gain access to a opportunity / likelihood / possibility that 30=建立在大量的学习/实践上： build / base on tremendous amount of study / practice 31=进

40、行调查/执行任务： conduct / carry out an study / task / experiment 32=辞去工作/学习： leave / quit ones job / work / school 33=参加考试/竞赛等： enter（for）the examination / contest, race 34=参加活动/讨论： take part / participate / be engaged in sports / activities / discussion 35=实现自己的理想/愿望： realize / fulfill / achieve ones dre

41、am（hopes / wish / desire） 36=提高技术/能力： sharpen（increase / improve / enhance / boost）ones mental skill / ability 37=加快/促进发展： accelerate / facilitate / advance / enhance / boost the development of 38=随着生活节奏的加快： with the quickening pace / rhythm / tempo of modern life / society 39=开阔眼界/兴趣： broaden ones

42、interest / view / outlook，expand（broaden / enlarge）ones mental horizons 40=把时间花/浪费在： spend / waste time doing sth.，put in hours doing sth.1.相反的On the contrary,=by contrast,2. 换言之In other words,= to put it differently3. 别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是，我认为。It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe th

43、at4. 鉴于社会的实际需要。In view of the practical need of society 一、引出开头1： 我们都知道It is well-known to us that 就我所知As far as my knowledge is concerned, 2：最近问题引起了关注Recently the problem of has been brought into focus. Nowadays there is a growing concern over 3：现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题Nowadays（overpopulation）has become

44、 a problem we have to face. 4：互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 5. 人们一般认为It is a common belief thatIt is commonly believed that

45、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 二、表达不同观点 1： 人们对的观点因人而异，有些人认为然而其他人却认为 Peoples views onvary from person to person. Some hold thatHowever, others believe that 2：人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异 Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to person.=Different people hold different attitudes towards 3: 对于人们的观点大不相同 T

46、here are different opinions among people as to 三、表示结尾 1： 从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论 From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that 2：把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that 3：因此，我们最好的出这样的结论 Hence/Therefore,

47、 wed better come to the conclusion that 4: 毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点 There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 5: 总之，我们没有无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题All in all, we cannot live without,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would a

48、rise. 6: 如果能实践这三点。If one can really put the three points into action (practice),7: 唯有符合这三项要求，我们才能。Only by living up to the three requirements, can we8: 唯有通力合作，我们才能。Only with combined efforts, can we9: 因此由上列讨论我们可以明了。We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that) 四、提出建议1：该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了

49、 It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 2：毫无疑问，对问题应予以足够重视 There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 3： 显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是 Obviously ,if we want to do something it is essential that 4：只有这样，我们才能 Only in this way can we 五、预示后果 1：很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险 Obviou

50、sly，if we dont control the problem, the chances are thatwill lead us in danger. 2：毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会 No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that 3：很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展 It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation 六、表示论证 1：.在我看来，支持第一种观点比第二种

51、更有道理From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second 2：我无法完全同意这一观点I cannot entirely agree with the idea that 3：就我来说As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, 4：我真诚地相信I sincerely believe that=I am greatly convinced (that)子句. 5：最后，坦率地说，还有另外一个实际的原因Finally, t

52、o speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why 七、给出原因 1： .的原因是. The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 2:这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一第二第三 This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,.Second,.Third，。 3：一方面另一方面For one thing, For another thing， =On the one hand,On the other hand 4：我十分赞同这一论述，即。其主要原因如

53、下 I quite agree with the statement thatThe reasons are chiefly as follows. 八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法 1：解决这些麻烦的最好办法是 The best way to solve the troubles is 2：就某事而言， As far as something is concerned, 3;It is obvious that很显然 4：It may be true thatbut it doesnt mean that可能是对的，但这并不意味着 5:认为是自然的，但我们不应忽视It is natural

54、 to believe thatbut we shouldnt ignore that 6：There is no evidence to suggest that没有证据表明 九、表示好处和坏处 1：It has the following advantages.它有如下优势2：It is beneficial/harmful to us.=It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处 3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处 十、表示重要、方便、可能1：It is important (ne

55、cessary/difficult/convenient/possible) for sb to do sth.对于某人做是 2：It plays an important role in our life. 常用英语谚语 1：事实胜于雄辩Actions speak louder than words. 2：发光的未必都是金子All is not gold that glitters. 3：条条大路通罗马All roads lead to Rome. 4：良好的开端是成功的一半A good beginning is half done. 5：有利必有弊Every advantage has i

56、ts disadvantage 6：失之毫厘，差之千里A miss is as good as a mile. 7：失败是成功之母Failure is the mother of success. 8:活到老，学到老It is never too old to learn. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Obviously, the ear

57、liest teachers we have in our lives in most cases are our parents, and they are generally the most involved in the development and education of their children. Yet neither are all parents good teachers nor are those good parents the best teachers. First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As

58、normal individuals, some parents more or less have bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy every thing from their parents. Ano

59、ther deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, if their children did not fo

60、llow the instructions, the children would be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses. Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the

61、 preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes

62、 more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than ever before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early

63、as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family. Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents love

64、 sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albert Einsteins mother and Forest Gumps mother are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.404 wordsDelete this page when template is finished